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12/02/12
A sad but accurate portrayal of too many attitudes and households. Strong characterisation and descriptions throughout.
12/04/12
Interesting perspective of life! I was a little confused with how shopping for fruit related to her daughter's wayward ways.
Your description of the street vendors was very good. I could almost see and hear it.
12/04/12
A profound commentary on the world of today. This reflective and truth bearing piece was well written and certainly on topic.
Thank you. GOd bless~