The Official Writing Challenge
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11/24/12
I've always heard you have to get a person lost before they can get saved. You showed that here. Interesting read.
11/27/12
Nicely done. Thanks!
God bless~
This is a great story. I can't think of a better opening line to grab the reader and make them want to keep reading. The last paragraph is divine and words I really need to hear right now. Great job!
11/28/12
So much symbolism and so many rich and vibrant word pictures were painted here. You did such a wonderful job of showing and letting our minds see and understand through your words. Awesome work here!