The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! This gives me goosebumps for so many different reasons. I'm in awe of your ability to weave the words into poetry. I also am hit in the face with my death phobia and how silly it is. Though it won't make it go away instantly, your words are a wonderful step in healing my hidden angst.
11/24/12
Your word choices are wonderful in this eloquent poem. The stanza that begins with, "So many worship "Father Time," - Instead of time's Father" gave this reader reason to stop and take it in. I LOVE your ending stanza. What a powerful message.
11/25/12
Absolutely Beautiful!
11/26/12
Your poem has a great message. My favorite verse is the last one but the others build up nicely to that one. Well done.
Profound and eloquent - truly inspired bringing to the forefront an undeniable truth.
Great job!
11/26/12
Wow! You have packed so much into such a short entry, and I love the sweet contrast between Father Time and time's Father. Great work.
11/27/12
Clever and powerful. Thanks.
God bless~
11/28/12
This is a wonderful description of the topic in a poetic tapestry of words. Loved it!
So happy to see this win for you, Myrna - especially in this poetic genre. Great job and a big congratulations for his placement!
11/29/12
WOW! This is profound! Truly captivating. I hung onto every word. A very well deserved win!

Congratulations!
11/29/12
Oh Myrna, this is amazing. What incredible reminders and what a challenger to 'number our days'. Wonderful writing, so decsriptive. Many congratulations on your well earned placing. Thank you too for your kind comments.
11/29/12
Super congrats, Myrna, on your Editor's Choice with this wonderful message.
12/03/12
Congratulations on your well-deserved 3rd place. Well done.