The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh I could so relate to this lovely piece. I'm not sure why but this year has gone faster by tons than any other year. I just want to grab hold and slow it down, but there is a wonderful place in Glory waiting for me.
11/27/12
Your format and meter are super and your word choices are perfect. These are topped only by your uplifting and urgent message. This is top-notch writing!
11/27/12
In a word - "beautiful."
Thanks. God bless~
11/28/12
A lovely poem with a great message. My only suggestion would be to omit the extra ? and ! that you have included. But, I really enjoyed it.
11/29/12
This a great poem with its reminder that our biological clock is ticking away to the end. I love your delivery.
11/29/12
An excellent and wonderful poem with such an all-important message. Many congratulations on well deserved EC.
11/29/12
Excellent poem with such an important message! CONGRATULATIONS on your E.C. win! WAY TO WRITE!! :)
11/30/12
Wow another fantastic Time perspective piece-perhaps we should all sit back and ponder 'time'...