The Official Writing Challenge
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You had me at the title. The thought of Angel high piqued my curiosity and I had to read on. I enjoyed the tongue-in-cheek irony of how the angels were ready to give up on their humans. This is a beautiful message full of hope and compassion. I think you covered the topic in a fresh, yet fun way and still managed to bring out an important message. I could see this story being used by animal rescues all over the world. After reading this story, I think many would want to contribute to the organization. You've highlighted the plight of the animals, as well as the need to nurture the humans who casually throw away a living creature. This is a thought-provoking, well-written story.
11/21/12
You top the charts on the creativity meter. I enjoyed your warm-hearted approach to the issue of animal cruelty with a poignant story.