The Official Writing Challenge
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I totally enjoyed this sojourn into the MC's brain. As I read I glanced about--sure that I could hear his wheels grinding. You nailed the topic and also did a grand job of showing how two people can slowly drift apart, not even aware that they had been drifting until the chasm between them is so wide. Nice bit of writing on this thought-provoking piece.
What a lesson delightfully and poignantly told. Enjoyed this read very much.
Whew another convicting, lovingly told tale. Bittersweet and to the bottom of the heart of many relationships at times.
Loved this endearing, moving piece. Congratulations on you well-deserved placing!
Well written and maybe a bit convicting at the same time. I really liked the convincing way you presented your article with the dialogue and story line itself. Congratulations on your EC, Wilma!