The Official Writing Challenge
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Ahh I didn't see that ending coming at all! You did a fine job of bringing the characters to life and building the conflict. Mental pictures flashed through my head as I read on. This is a story that is true far more often than it should be. I grew up across from a farm and people would toss out kittens or dogs as if they were garbage thinking that the farm would be a perfect place to drop off unwanted animals. Sometimes I just don't get people.
11/17/12
Poor little dog. I felt for the dog AND the girl. Heartwarming piece.