The Official Writing Challenge
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This was really funny. You have a delightful sense of humor. The beginning was a tiny bit slow, there's no need to tell the reader what you're going to write about, just launch right into it. That would have given you more word space to show us other irritants (someone critiquing my hard work) and reactions (smiling and saying hmm, you may have a point while thinking but I don't think so) I really did enjoy read the list and laughed out loud at several of the reactions. I'm delighted you shared them and I thank you for your service in keeping the part of your world a safer place. :)
11/20/12
I have often wondered how in today's world, our law enforcement keep their cool. I know they are in a tough situation and many times their hands are tied. We expect so much from them. I enjoyed your questions and answer dialog. (especially the donut answers). :)
11/20/12
I really enjoyed your list of actions and reactions. I do have to agree that the beginning seemed a little slow, but your line about smudged brain cells made me laugh.