The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a lovely poem. You bring the story to life. Just last week in Bible study we were speaking of Adam and Eve and how the first thing God did was clothe them in furs thus creating the very first sacrifice. You do a great job of weaving that and making it a part of your message. It helps me to understand why Jesus had to be sacrificed.
11/15/12
I really enjoyed this poem. Good job! Thank you.
Congratulations for ranking 15th overall!