The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked this piece. I could totally relate to the MC. This year, especially I noticed the colors on the trees. I don't think I've ever seen so many hues from red to purple and orange. it was beautiful. Good job.
I am a person who LOVES color, so I could really appreciate your piece! You had some nicely descriptive phrases, such as "Mums stand shoulder to shoulder like mounded jewels." I also liked the line, "I opened God's closet and saw October hanging there."
CONGRATULATIONS on your E.C. win, Laura! WAY TO WRITE! :D Rereading it a second time, I appreciate your lovely color pictures even more, and that last line is very, very perfect!! :)
Congratulations Laura. This is a wonderful poem.
Stunning devotion to God's Majesty. His gift for our eyes only. Colors so magnificent we can only be in awe of our Creator. Thank you for this beautiful piece!
This is just beautiful. I love the contrasts and the words 'I open God’s closet
To view October hanging there,' is just a perfect opening to your descriptions of Autumn. Great ending too. Many congratulations.