The Official Writing Challenge
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I really enjoyed this piece. I smiled at the Dogwood Park and thought it was quite clever. You did a nice job of building Ebony's character and it's not always easy to do that without personifying the animal. I also liked how your story came around full circle.
11/07/12
I liked your story of that "whimpering bundle of jet black fluff"...and that little message of how hard it is to let go of those you love but want to be happy was shown quite well through the experiences of your MC. Very good work.
11/08/12
Beautifully descriptive word pictures here, which reminded me of our Border Collie, who fell instantly in love with anyone who came to visit - even intruders.
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