The Official Writing Challenge
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11/02/12
Such great rhyme and meter...it's amazing to me the skill it must require to tell such a beautiful story at the same time...it was really touching!
11/05/12
A really lovely poem. Such a touching story and beautifully told. Good rhythm and rhyming.
Wow what a delightful way to tell a stunning story. Your rhymes and the way you made the words flow from the page intrigued me. Then the descriptions kept me going and finally at the end, like the boy a sense of peace washed over me.
11/08/12
Charla, I love it all, starting with the title. This was such a satisfying story in a beautiful poetic format. I could see these two and it warmed my soul. Thanks.