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Interesting entry. Realistic conversation. I was a bit surprised by the sudden scene change/flashback. Like how the last sentence goes back to the beginning sentence.
Wow this is a powerful story. You had my attention throughout it all. I did suspect Angie was an angel and that he would see her again. However, I didn't expect the men from the bushes and the gun. It jerked me into reality--a sad one where somehow killing other humans is called war. This is perfect timing as Veteran's Day approaches. What a good way to remind people to thank those in the service and their families for their sacrifices on our behalf.
Congratulations for ranking 20th overall!