The Official Writing Challenge
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11/05/12
Your neighborhood descriptions put me right in the scene. I was mesmerized immediately. The tender reflections from your MC left this reader filled with emotion. Your dual-meaning title is perfect.
11/07/12
This is a great story, with a powerful message and unexpected. Your descriptions are very clever, and it fits the topic beautifully.