The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a fun and light-heart poem. It was definitely on topic. I had no idea there were so many rhymes fro park. Every once in a while, the rhythm seemed a tad off but that could just be me because I struggle with hearing stressed and unstressed syllables and have no rhythm anywhere in me. :) I thought it was sweet and it left me smiling and eager for spring to come back so I could once more enjoy the scenes you described. Until then though your lovely words will suffice. :)