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Amazingly powerful story with a prolific message. The table we will all share together for eternity. Brilliant entry and approach for the topic.

God bless~
Such a wonderfully descriptive, flowing story with the message coming through loud and clear. Beautiful. I love it!
This is a really intense piece. I could feel like I was deep in the Bayou, though I've never been anywhere near the swampland. There may have been a touch of purple prose, at least for me. Though you did do a nice job of painting a picture. I can almost close my eyes and smell the smells. Your MC and the words of wisdom riveted me to my chair. I found myself holding my breath as you built the conflict. The ending is beautiful. Well done.
Very interesting story. The journey to becoming a Christian was very uniquely done and the imagery you created made it seem as if I was in the boat along side the MC. Great work.

God bless!
Your words swiftly emersed me in to the time and place of this setting. Loved the story, loved the message.
Enchanting story leading us to a timeless message. Beautifully written, well done!