The Official Writing Challenge
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10/25/12
Beautiful! Truly beautiful!
Thank you. God Bless~
This is beautiful. You did an outstanding job of depicting the agony that Jesus must have gone through. It was on topic and touched my heart.
10/25/12
Beautiful. What a touching story. To think of all that Jesus did for us, all he suffered so that we could go to the Father. Great work.

God bless!
10/27/12
This is a creative and poetic view of God's sacrifice for us. Excellent writing.
10/28/12
This piece touches my spirit so profoundly...a vivid poetic masterpiece!
11/03/12
I was taken aback in one of those ah ha moments realizing this was the first entry-potentially the only story that utilized the topic in this way. In my mind the most famous cup reference in all history. Well done!