The Official Writing Challenge
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10/25/12
Quite a story so many layers and a handful of messages to boot. Wonderful job.

Thanks. God bless~
10/25/12
I enjoyed your story. You touched on some good things here and had some really good dialogue.

God bless!
This is a great story. It is one I had to read a few times to totally get though. You did do a nice job of developing the characters. Also I wonder if the cupping her elbow will be enough to score high on the topic criterion. The ending left me with my stomach lurching. I think you did a great job with the limited word space and could see you expanding this into a novel. You do have a knack for telling a powerful story for sure.