The Official Writing Challenge
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10/25/12
Oh my gosh, this touched me deeply. What a poignant entry. It has so many layers and meanings. I loved it.
Thanks. God Bless~
10/25/12
What a beautiful story. Sad, but filled with hope. Love the last line - perfect!
This is such a bittersweet story. You do an excellent job of bringing Hunter to life. The conflict was palpable and built as the story went on. Oh to have faith like Hunter's--it speaks volumes and touches my heart.
10/25/12
An amazing story. I loved how you portrayed Hunter and the MC and the touching relationship they shared. This has inspired me. Great writing and a sure winner!

God bless!
10/26/12
Very moving story! I loved how Hunter enjoyed reflecting on Jesus! A little child shall lead them! :) This piece had such a great message, and the last line was perfect! Great job! :)