The Official Writing Challenge
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10/25/12
A lively and inspiring poem Thank you. God bless~
10/26/12
Good job with this Bible-based poetic entry. Rhyme and meter seemed effortless to this reader, and that's the work of a creative mind.
10/29/12
Wow! I love your message and poetic form. This is masterful work!
10/29/12
Beautiful with a great message.

God bless!
You managed to tell a detailed and descriptive story while still keeping the flow and rhyming pattern of the poem. This is a wonderful depiction of the familiar story.
11/03/12
Lovely take on the Good Samaritan story from the victims perspective. Loved it! Beautifully crafted poem.
11/03/12
oops from the rescuers perspective dah...Sam might have been a clue.