The Official Writing Challenge
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10/25/12
Touching, moving and lovely poem. Thank you. God bless~
10/25/12
A beautiful and moving poem. You showed the love of Christ perfectly.

God bless!
10/26/12
The title drew me in. Made me think of Alice in wonderland, but, whereas in Wonderland, the call was simply, "Drink me," as a tempt, or lure, this was, "You must drink me," a command, and something so much more.

The poem, deep, compelling, strong, and true--did not disappoint.
10/27/12
Your moving poem deals with deep truths and does so really well. Thank you.
Wow this is a powerful piece. You grabbed my attention immediately and though poetry isn't always my favorite genre this one gripped at my heart.