The Official Writing Challenge
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10/25/12
Refreshing entry with fond memories and emotions...nicely done. Thank you. God bless
10/25/12
I enjoyed the story. It captured a time that I never lived, but wished I could go back in time to see and experience. Thank you for sharing.

God Bless!
10/27/12
I love this story! It sounds just like my Grandpa sharing one of his stories as we bounced along in his ancient red and white Dodge pick-up. I was only five, and thought my Grandpa must surely know the entire world for all the stories he had to tell. You've done a terrific job!
10/28/12
I enjoyed all the colorful descriptions and wonderful little nostalgic details. Good story and great writing.
The title pointed to days gone by and the story did not disappoint. Well done.
11/02/12
Your descriptions drew me in with warmth and credibility. Loved your characters and their interaction. Great work.
Congratulations for ranking 8th in level three!