The Official Writing Challenge
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10/25/12
Refreshing entry with fond memories and emotions...nicely done. Thank you. God bless
10/25/12
I enjoyed the story. It captured a time that I never lived, but wished I could go back in time to see and experience. Thank you for sharing.

God Bless!
10/27/12
I love this story! It sounds just like my Grandpa sharing one of his stories as we bounced along in his ancient red and white Dodge pick-up. I was only five, and thought my Grandpa must surely know the entire world for all the stories he had to tell. You've done a terrific job!
10/28/12
I enjoyed all the colorful descriptions and wonderful little nostalgic details. Good story and great writing.
10/31/12
The title pointed to days gone by and the story did not disappoint. Well done.
11/02/12
Your descriptions drew me in with warmth and credibility. Loved your characters and their interaction. Great work.
11/03/12
Congratulations for ranking 8th in level three!