The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a great story. I could really relate to the MC. I also think you did a nice job of subtly showing us the blessings that God surprises us with. I call them I love you's from God.

The only red ink I saw was the lack of hyphen in fifty-two.

You did a nice job of showing the topic and delivering a great message too. Nice job.
This piece shows illustrations of blessings we all take for granted. Even the struggling son is seen in the light of hope. Good writing, and an encouragement to guard against complaining. Thanks!