The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a lovely testimony. I too have had times when I've demanded that God send me a signal. I blush now at my arrogance but the next time I'm doubting myself, I'll likely call out again and wouldn't be at all surprised to see a sea gull tap at my window.

The only thing I might suggest would be to save the exclamation points for dialog. The ellipses too were a tiny bit distracting to me and have a greater impact if used sparingly.

Punctuation is such a trivial detail and what's truly important is your beautiful message. You did a nice job of grabbing my attention and the ending brought the story full circle. You covered the topic in a couple of ways. The story is ha-ha funny but it's also funny strange and shows how God can make what some would call a coincidence a personal I love you from Jesus Himself.
10/13/12
I love how you have shared your spiritual lethargy so honestly before you discovered the joy on the other side of the 'pane.' Well done.
10/13/12
I really enjoyed reading this. I agree with you that God has a sense of humour and that he knows just what we need at particular times. Thanks for sharing this.
10/15/12
I enjoyed this entry, good job. Thanks. God bless~