The Official Writing Challenge
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You did a brilliant job with this allegory. So many of us hoard feelings and memories piling them high in the gray matter of our brain. I could see a lot of resemblances between me and that old house. It is important to have a thorough spring cleaning and of course preparing for the winter months is a must. Your words really touched me and I saw in myself remnants of a past that I am trying desperately to hold onto but it is just weighing me down and cluttering my mind up with junk.
10/14/12
Clever and fun analogy - really liked it!
10/14/12
You have so lightly touched on the discovery of being closer to the crypt than to the cradle. Great images in your writing, stitched together with healthy threads of self-deprecation.
10/15/12
Nicely done! I enjoyed the entire piece. Thanks.

God bless~