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10/12/12
Oh I delight in your slightly sardonic yet subtle sense of humor. You had me chuckling the whole way through. I used to work in OB and could tell right away who had been to the childbirth classes and who hadn't. I've also had my share of fainting fathers. You did a splendid job on this piece and I truly enjoyed it.
10/13/12
Loved this - as a father who attended all four births, I've relived all those moments in the delivery room. Great touches of fun amidst the confusion. Well done.
10/14/12
Still funny after all these years...loved the ending.
10/14/12
I can identify with you here, having attended all of our four births. Love the wry asides here, because they bring it to life to all those who are estrogen-deficient. Well done.
10/15/12
Good job and you nailed the topic completely. Cute story. Thanks. God Bless~