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Oh I delight in your slightly sardonic yet subtle sense of humor. You had me chuckling the whole way through. I used to work in OB and could tell right away who had been to the childbirth classes and who hadn't. I've also had my share of fainting fathers. You did a splendid job on this piece and I truly enjoyed it.
10/13/12
Loved this - as a father who attended all four births, I've relived all those moments in the delivery room. Great touches of fun amidst the confusion. Well done.
Still funny after all these years...loved the ending.
10/14/12
I can identify with you here, having attended all of our four births. Love the wry asides here, because they bring it to life to all those who are estrogen-deficient. Well done.
10/15/12
Good job and you nailed the topic completely. Cute story. Thanks. God Bless~