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This is a wonderful character sketch of a Mother to be admired for her patience, her sense of humor, and her wisdom in parenting skills.
10/11/12
Sunday morning's curry. Like it. A great little wry cameo of pre-service life. Strong characters and dialogue.
10/11/12
I really enjoyed this and can relate to the Sunday rush before church. The strangest problems seem to happen on Sundays. You did a great job with the characters' personalities.
10/12/12
Beautifully done, with authentic dialogues, characters were three dimensional...and really well done. Loved it.

God bless~
10/13/12
10/14/12
Kids are so precious! Hope to see this Sunday Morning Scurry in a cookbook!
This is a powerful piece. My Mom's first baby would have had severe developmental disabilities had he lived past the age of 2 so I've been tuned into that and often wondered if Donnie had lived would I be embarrassed by him. My guess would be I could tease him but no one else had better not even thought about it. You did a nice job handling this sensitive subject.
Congratulations for ranking 20th overall!