The Official Writing Challenge
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Great story--creative, funny, delightful. I could visualize the whole event.
Very descriptive and restrained commentary on something so visual. Poor Colleen, to be "caught underwears."
The author's somewhat dispassionate tone lent itself to telling this story, a sort of tongue-in-cheek affect. I could picture almost everything as I read also. The pudgy pugs, the haughty bird, poor Colleen. The only thing not really made clear to me is how the door accidentally locked on her.
Great job with this entire entry. I felt as if I were there watching it unfold. Nicely done. God bless~
Pets are so unpredictable. Nice!
What an upsetting introduction to the new day poor Colleen had! I felt badly for her but did enjoy your writing! :)
Have you been spying on me? This was a hoot. I enjoyed every bit and could relate to a lot more than I care to admit. :)
Congratulations for ranking 8th in Masters and placing 11th overall!