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I loved this piece. Good message, nice memories, and family traditions which is so important.

Nicely done. Thank you.

God bless~
this was a beautiful sentimental story masterfully the heart of your MC and the "misfit" gang and what God accomplished with their lives....loved the images you created with each character and their enduring friendships.
I enjoyed your story and the various characters. I wonder if it is a true story (?). Thank you.
I love this story. What a great way to show the underdog through the eyes of a child, and now an adult. Kids can be so mean and I wish the world was filled with characters like your MC. It's a great reminder to parents to not only teach their children understanding and compassion but to let them see the parent act with compassion. You did a nice job with this one.