The Official Writing Challenge
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09/13/12
Oh this was so good. Wonderful job with the topic and the entire piece held me captive.

Thanks. God bless~
09/13/12
Very thought-provoking and inviting work. Loved it.
09/14/12
You captured the feelings and atmosphere of that special meal at the shore ... and summed it up perfectly in your last verse.
09/14/12
excellent poetic description of John 21...the images, feelings, and message.
09/14/12
I really enjoyed this poem about the John 21 story. Beautifully written. Thank you.
09/16/12
Great poem!
I like how you built the atmosphere around this familiar story.
This poem is a beautiful reflection of this familiar Bible story. You did a nice job with it and I enjoyed it.
09/20/12
We chose the same topic! :) This is my favorite Scripture story of Jesus, and I enjoyed reading your poetic retelling. The ending was especially powerful! Good job!
I was drawn into your poem and my senses came alive as your poem developed. I love the theme you chose and you did it adequate justice by your inspired thoughts and rhymes.
Congratulations for ranking 7th in Masters and 11 overall!