The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh this was so good. Wonderful job with the topic and the entire piece held me captive.

Thanks. God bless~
Very thought-provoking and inviting work. Loved it.
You captured the feelings and atmosphere of that special meal at the shore ... and summed it up perfectly in your last verse.
excellent poetic description of John 21...the images, feelings, and message.
I really enjoyed this poem about the John 21 story. Beautifully written. Thank you.
Great poem!
I like how you built the atmosphere around this familiar story.
This poem is a beautiful reflection of this familiar Bible story. You did a nice job with it and I enjoyed it.
We chose the same topic! :) This is my favorite Scripture story of Jesus, and I enjoyed reading your poetic retelling. The ending was especially powerful! Good job!
I was drawn into your poem and my senses came alive as your poem developed. I love the theme you chose and you did it adequate justice by your inspired thoughts and rhymes.
Congratulations for ranking 7th in Masters and 11 overall!