The Official Writing Challenge
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what a sweet story! Thanks for sharing.
Sweet story, but a bit hard to follow. Maybe too much information squeezed into the 750 word limit.
09/14/12
Awww. THis was such a sweet old fashioned love story. I completely embraced it and enjoyed it totally.

Thank you.

God Bless~
09/14/12
An enjoyable piece. I agree, there is a lot crammed in here. It looks like this could easily be expanded into a novel. Good job.
09/15/12
I enjoyed your romantic story. I agree with others that it well be expanded into a longer story. But well done.
09/15/12
Lovely story - like the others have said, I REALLY hope you expand this.
09/17/12
Touching story. You made Cole come to life and I could picture him riding on the horse.

God bless.