The Official Writing Challenge
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09/13/12
Loved this piece. A unique idea and well-written.
Very well written. Good use of dialogue to tell a story.
09/14/12
Loved the Title. The story was quite unique and offered an interesting way of presenting the topic.

Nicely done. God Bless~
09/15/12
This is s powerful story and brings the Passover event alive in a really unusual way. Well done.
09/17/12
Wow! This is a great story. I loved it. I hope to see a lot more from you.

God bless.