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09/13/12
This is well-written with a clear message. You connect well with the reader. One suggestion (just my opinion) is to choose a more contemporary translation for the Bible verse. Sometimes readers struggle with the King James and may not continue reading. The last line of this piece is perfect. Great job!
09/14/12
I thought your piece to be creative, timely, classic conveying a powerful message in the interim.

I know it is a "choice" about the version of the Bible, but for me I only read KJV. I think it is the truest form of translation there is. So, I was glad you chose KJV.

Beautiful job.

Loved the last line...

God Bless~
09/15/12
I really like your relaxed style of writing in this piece and the spiritual implications for the reader flowed so easily from your creative take on John 21. I also chose this for my topic told from Peter's eyes. I am enjoying several other entries on John 21 that keep shedding more spiritual lightfrom different angles,yours included.