The Official Writing Challenge
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09/13/12
I liked the way you connected the experience in Sicily to the story of Elijah. Putting a break between each paragraph will make it easier to read. Lots of good descriptions in this piece.
09/14/12
Highly descriptive and informative entry. I enjoyed it. Nicely done. Thank you.

God Bless~
09/18/12
I hate to admit it, but I have a bit of a subversive nature, and so your title drew me in...

I love your style of writing, witty, concise, and smooth. I would have loved to hear more about the barbeque held against the grain, and more about how you had been made aware of God of creation...etcetera, on top of those mountains, but I can't complain, this was an enjoyable read.