The Official Writing Challenge
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09/10/12
I totally enjoyed this (and secretly hope it's true) mainly because I love miraculous nature of the "strange provision" concept. :) Thanks for the smiles.
This is such a great story. I wasn't expecting to go where you took me but I enjoyed every minute of the trip.

The only red ink I noted was I didn't think College should be capitalized but can see how you were using it as a proper noun. Plus that's a tiny thing.

Your characters were fantastic. I believe there are probably many times that "we never know" but by following the Holy Spirits direction we are able to bless someone beyond comprehension and in turn we bless ourselves while serving Jesus. Great bit of writing here. I truly enjoyed every bit.
Congratulations for ranking 7th in Masters and 15 overall!