The Official Writing Challenge
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Superb characterization of the inner struggle. I could feel the "that which I would not, that I do..." Your message really speaks to me. Thanks.
I enjoyed this clever and fresh take. I so can empathize with the MC. I often have two or sometimes three or four voices in my head arguing back and forth. I also thought the choose your ending was a touch of genius. We literally can choose our own ending! Great philosophical piece of writing.
Congratulations on your EC!!!!!!!!!!!!

God Bless~
Congratulations on your Editor's Choice award with this thought-provoking entry! Super!
Really creative dialogue between the flesh and the Spirit. Great entry- congrats!
CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR E.C. WIN with this insightful, well-written piece! The old and the new self battle on many fronts, and I appreciated the reminder to let "the best man win"!
Congrats Suzanne! Good job!