The Official Writing Challenge
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This is an intense allegory. I really liked how you demonstrated some of the seven deadly sins. This is a clever take on the topic and definitely an out of the box read with a very important message.
09/08/12
Wow! very well written!

I love allegories, and this one held my attention all the way through.

Well done.
09/09/12
WOW! This is fantastic. Every word captivated me and what a clever and unique use of the topic. Very well done!
09/09/12
What a fantastic, thought-provoking piece. Well done!
09/10/12
Well written and very interesting. you made your point very well. Great entry!
09/13/12
Congratulations on your EC!!!!!!!!!!!!

God Bless~
09/13/12
Congratulations!!!!!!!!!!!!

God Bless~
09/13/12
Brenda, What an intricate breathe of fresh air. Your words truly satisfy the soul. Congratulations on your Editor's Choice award!
09/13/12
Wow, absolutely spectacular story! The 'unpretentious house' where the true Bread of Life offered her the invitation was fantastic imagery.
09/13/12
Oh, I REALLY liked this piece!! Allegories are a favorite of mine, and this one was great! CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved E.C.! Way to write! :D
09/16/12
Congrats Brenda! Good job!