The Official Writing Challenge
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09/07/12
This was a great read. Your "back door entrance" approach to the topic worked very well. The story was whole story was well done, and enjoyable to read.
09/08/12
Poor Jacob. :) You had me smiling all the way through. Your reverse psychology worked on me. I'm getting a plum for lunch.
09/09/12
Great job. Loved the approach, plot and ending. Very enjoyable read!
09/11/12
Oh this is a grand read. I loved how you masterfully built just the right amount of suspense. You had me holding my breathing, then chuckling, then a sort of sadness settled in as I realized for some this isn't a far-fetched story but more of reality. Awesome writing!
09/11/12
Oh..this is a sad story to me...I can only hope that it never really happens!

Well written and excellent...kept me wanting more.....God Bless
09/11/12
Quite enjoyable! Love how he got "caught" sneaking in with the "bad" stuff.
09/13/12
Yesterday I pulled plums from a tree and bit into one. A grub reared up and looked at me. That cured my plum passion! Superb entry. Loved it! Congratulations.
09/13/12
Congratulations on your EC!!!!!!!!!!!!

God Bless~
09/13/12
Congratulations!!!!!!!!!!!!

God Bless~
09/13/12
Congratulations!!!!!!!!!!!!

God Bless~
09/13/12
Congratulations, Myrna, on your Editor's Choice award for this thought-provoking, fun story.
09/13/12
Very, very interesting and entertaining twist!
09/16/12
Congrats Myrna! Good job!