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Topic: Sweet to the Taste (08/23/12)
TITLE: Your Abilities Are Appreciated
By Wilma Schlegel
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She bit into the sweet-sticky crispness and pieces of the cookie that were left after she bit, fell out of the cellophane and landed in her lap. Such a mess, but she couldn’t resist reading the words of wisdom from the slip of paper tucked inside.
She looked at it and crumbled it up. “Mine was stupid, what did yours say?” she asked her sister Lynne who sat in the passenger seat.
Lynne had pulled her cookie’s message out just moments before. “Oh, mine was dumb, too. It said, ‘Your abilities are appreciated.’”.
“Your abilities are appreciated? Why can’t I get something like that? That would be so encouraging now while I wait for my evaluation at work.” Audra glanced at Lynne’s side of the car and laughed. “But I do appreciate your ability to eat without making a huge mess.”
“That’s right, little sister, just one of my many and don’t you forget it!” Lynne laughed with her sister then asked, “So, what did yours say, anyway? ‘You shouldn’t eat and drive’?”
Audra came to a smooth stop at the traffic signal and then glared at Lynne. “No, Smartie, my cookie said, ‘Before you can do something, you must first be something’.” She shook her head and turned her attention back to traffic.
“I guess that’s true. Kind of nebulous though,” Lynne concluded.
“How so?” Audra tried to sound disinterested.
“Everybody’s always doing something, so everybody is something,” Lynne looked mindlessly out the window.
“Yeah, but it’s like that one was meant for me. Like insinuating that I’m - not...” Audra’s voice trailed away, Then she tried to make a joke, “I guess I’m just nebulous - I’m so stressed about the evaluation.”
“You analyze too much. It was just a simple fortune cookie.” Lynne seemed to dismiss the subject.
Watching traffic, Audra thought ‘I analyze too much? Lynne just doesn’t know what it’s like to be a deep thinker. She smiled to herself. I guess that’s not one of her ‘appreciated abilities’. Audra wasn’t surprised that when Lynne spoke again she had completely changed the subject.
“Hey remember those ‘Puppy Dogs’ that Mom used to make for us?’ She licked her lips. “They were so sweet and tender! We couldn’t wait to taste them fresh out of the oven.”
“Yeah, I loved those with the cinnamon sugar topping. They were great. Are you going to ask her to make some this weekend?” Audra asked her sister.
“Maybe, but I was just trying to make a point.”
‘Really?!’ Audra thought.
“Do you know why we called them ‘Puppy Dogs’?” Lynne asked.
“I always figured it was just a cutesy little kid thing.” Audra said tilting her head in amusement.
“No. Whenever Mom made a pie she’d take the left-over crust and she’d roll it out and let me cut out shapes with my favorite cookie cutter. Then we’d put on the cinnamon sugar and bake it. The cookie cutter was a puppy.” Lynne explained.
“That’s so cute!” Audra exclaimed. “But what’s your point?”
“My point is, when she stopped using the cookie cutter (I lost it), she just rolled it out and baked it that way. But we still knew it was a ‘Puppy Dog’. That’s what it will always be to us.”
“So...?” Audra still wasn’t getting it.
“So, we wouldn’t let anyone tell us that they’re not ‘Puppy Dogs’. We know they definitely are. So, girl, don’t let those voices in your head or in silly fortune cookies tell you that you’re not something. You’re made in the image of God. Nothing can change that. You are very definitely something, something very good.
Audra pulled the car into their parents’ driveway considering her sister’s words.
Lynne patted Audra’s shoulder and moved to get out of the car. “Race you in!
“Lynne, wait.” Audra grabbed Lynne’s hand. “Thanks a lot, your words were just what I needed.... I’ll be just fine Monday. I am something, something perfect for that job! And, come to think of it, your cookie was right, too. Your abilities are appreciated!”
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