The Official Writing Challenge
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This is beautiful and it spoke volumes to me. I think you managed to give the reader a glimpse into the world of the MC. Too bad there aren't more people like "Nutty Noreen." This story has many messages and will speak differently to different people.
08/24/12
A touching story that had so many meanings on so many levels. Excellent writing, beautifully descriptive and well told. Loved the ending...captivating.

Great job...God bless~
Very well written. Kept me interested the whole way through. Good description. I could "see" Grandma. I liked how the ending ties in wih the opening sentence--God blowing kisses.
08/28/12
This is an interesting entry and quite touching. Good writing.
08/29/12
This is just lovely to read. I was so wrapped up in it. It was very touching too and your word pictures brought it all to life. Great job.