The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a hoot to read, though I imagine a bit uncomfortable to live. I enjoyed your characters immensely and thought they seemed quite realistic.

Instead of using taglines like he said or she groaned, you may want to use that space to show the characters feelings. "Nobody will notice us. She stood with her feet apart and crossed her arms.--This identifies the speaker and shows she is getting defensive. You did something similar a few times and it really helped me picture the characters.

I think your story was right on topic. It was interesting to see the difference between male and female shoppers. Then you took it a step further and showed the problems a newly married couple faces. The ending with the interfering shopper was perfect. I loved how she guided them while at the same time plotting a way to get the last roll of generic foil! Genius!
Lol, I was afraid they'd break out into that infamous 'first fight as a married couple' right in the store isle. I loved the additon of the savvy interloper!
08/24/12
Hahahahahahahahahahahahaha!
Loved the whole thing. You've managed to capture the "nonsense" that a couple can experience in the beginning of a marriage partnership. It resonates truth and a powerful message at once.

Nice touch with the stranger giving unsolicited advice.

Good job. God bless~
Fun story! I enjoyed it very much.
08/28/12
This has a lot of insight into a young married couple, and it is funny to us now. As someone already stated, though, it wasn't always fun when it was happening. I can recall a few similar "learning experiences. lol Good writing.
Congratulations for ranking 6th in your level and 15 overall!