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This was such a peaceful yet powerful entry. The words to describe the MC's "visual feast" were beautiful, so poetic...and flowed smoothly.

Great job with the topic and an important message for all of us as we go through life. That God is all around us, He is the Creator and so He is with us always.

It touched my heart. Thanks you.

God Bless~
I enoyed this and your lovely imaginative take on the topic. Thank you.
This is a unique take on the topic. I enjoyed your "soul banquet" very much. Good writing.
This is a delicious display of colours and beauty. A clear case of showing rather than just telling.
Ahh this especially touched my heart. My kids are all entering the next phase of their lives. I worry about them all and about myself. How will we handle all the changes? The answer is in your story. Jesus will walk beside us and guide us. I love to walk in the middle of the night. I live way out in the country and feel like God is speaking to me through his stars. This is a delightful and reassuring story.
Wonderfully descriptive with an inspiring message--made me long for fall to hurry and get here!