The Official Writing Challenge
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08/17/12
What a beautifully complex and compelling story! I loved the concept, the meaning and the characters. Excellent job, well written, and certainly on topic.

Thank you! God bless~
08/17/12
Straight out of Henry the Ate-th*! Loved the colour, the characters, the energy and the warmth of this entry. It should rate very well.

* This king was also given the nickname of "Ennui the Eighth," because he quickly became bored with each of his wives. The phrase "I won't keep you long" is actually a direct quote from - him from most of his marriage services.
This is an excellently written story--descriptive and interesting with well drawn characters and with a good message.
I enjoyed this tale. It reminded me a bit of the parable of the feast where the invited were too busy so they brought people from the street into the banquet. You had some delightful and my favorite--disgusting descriptions! Nice job.
Congratulations for ranking 6th in Masters and 11th overall!