The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed the retelling of this story (one of my favorites). It was interestingly told from a different viewpoint.
08/16/12
Reading this story was like being a fly on the wall. I love Biblical fiction, and this is one of my favorite stories. Nice!
08/17/12
A fabulous job with this entry. I love how creative your story was of Esther. Interesting view you shared, and I always enjoy Biblical fiction as well as scripture reality. Nicely done.

Thank you. God Bless~
08/18/12
Good imagineering of the Esther story, but I wonder of you could have used a few synonyms for "the mistress," which seemed a little stilted and repetitive as you set the scene.
You did a spectacular Job retelling this story. Even though I knew the ending I found myself excited to keep reading. I really enjoyed seeing this from the slave girl's POV.