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This is a very interesting interpretation of the familiar story. I love the imagery you've used so aptly.
08/17/12
Amazing detail, imagery, description, and imagination for this well written entry.

Excellent piece. Thank you.

God bless~
08/17/12
We know so little about the "rich young ruler" and I love how your imagination conveyed him and his story to us.
08/18/12
Lots of colour and energy, and I love the word pictures. I think the mention of Allah may be a little premature - by a few centuries, but otherwise you've given us very absorbing read.
I liked this. I wasn't sure where you were taking me at first but I loved the trip and the final destination was outstanding. I think it was a clever take on the topic. I never really thought about what happened to the rich man afterward. I think that's an important thing to ponder and you did a great job of getting me to think about it.
Congratulations for ranking 15th overall!