The Official Writing Challenge
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08/16/12
This was an entertaining story...and there were similarities of "Saul & David" - nicely tied in.

Great job. I loved the ending. Thank you.

God Bless~
08/18/12
This is so interesting and follows the story so well! I loved it. Good writing.
08/21/12
A moving and delightful re-telling of the old testament story. This was so well done, had a very modern twist to it and yet was faithful to the meaning of the original. I loved the last line "... I'm home now." It just summed up all the emotion your piece conveyed. Excellent work!
I enjoyed this charming little tale about the highs and lows of life. You covered the topic in a fresh way. Good job.
08/22/12
Love the modern version of this story. You did an excellent job in telling it and writing it. God bless!
Congratulations for ranking 6th in level three and for placing 13 overall!