The Official Writing Challenge
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08/16/12
This was an entertaining story...and there were similarities of "Saul & David" - nicely tied in.

Great job. I loved the ending. Thank you.

God Bless~
08/18/12
This is so interesting and follows the story so well! I loved it. Good writing.
08/21/12
A moving and delightful re-telling of the old testament story. This was so well done, had a very modern twist to it and yet was faithful to the meaning of the original. I loved the last line "... I'm home now." It just summed up all the emotion your piece conveyed. Excellent work!
08/22/12
I enjoyed this charming little tale about the highs and lows of life. You covered the topic in a fresh way. Good job.
08/22/12
Love the modern version of this story. You did an excellent job in telling it and writing it. God bless!
08/23/12
Congratulations for ranking 6th in level three and for placing 13 overall!