The Official Writing Challenge
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08/16/12
Wow- I got the chillds with this astoundingly moving story. Nicely done. Powerful ending.

Thanks...God bless~
08/18/12
I enjoyed this. It is well written in a few words. A lot of food for thought.
08/19/12
The Bread of Life brings healing! Your banquet story told it beautifully!
08/20/12
I love that little Thaddeus received his sight at the end. Love the story, very moving. God bless!
08/21/12
Wonderful piece of writing. So skilfull to be able to convey such power and meaning in such a small space. Awesome work here!
This is a sweet story. Young Thaddeus is a charming character and I'd love to read more about him. I think it would fill an entire book!

I did stumble over some of the sentences. A good thing to do is to ask someone to read the story aloud and if they stumble, then you might want to restructure that sentence.

You covered the topic in a fun and intriguing way. This is a delightful read. good job.