The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow- I got the chillds with this astoundingly moving story. Nicely done. Powerful ending.

Thanks...God bless~
I enjoyed this. It is well written in a few words. A lot of food for thought.
The Bread of Life brings healing! Your banquet story told it beautifully!
I love that little Thaddeus received his sight at the end. Love the story, very moving. God bless!
Wonderful piece of writing. So skilfull to be able to convey such power and meaning in such a small space. Awesome work here!
This is a sweet story. Young Thaddeus is a charming character and I'd love to read more about him. I think it would fill an entire book!

I did stumble over some of the sentences. A good thing to do is to ask someone to read the story aloud and if they stumble, then you might want to restructure that sentence.

You covered the topic in a fun and intriguing way. This is a delightful read. good job.