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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Diet - deadline is 8-9-12 9:59 am NY time. (08/02/12)

TITLE: Marmaduke and Mackerel
By Addie Pleasance


Take a look at Ray and me if you want to know if opposites attract. Ray can have a conversation with a busboy or an ambassador; I could happily go for days talking to no one whosoever. The last thing Ray read was the Sunday morning comics; Iím working through the Harvard Classics. Right now, Ray is probably listening to Earl Scruggs while Iíve found a Brahms piano concerto on the radio.

I say probably, because Ray is a few hundred miles away. Iíve been at a seaside cottage for a few weeks, a living illustration of what Rayís pastor meant six years ago when he used the phrase unequally yoked. I prickled at his words back then, angry at the imagery; Iím no oneís ox. In a rare departure from orthodoxy, Ray married me anyway. To me, his faith was an endearing quirk, something to smile at when my friends asked What do you see in him?

Do opposites attract? Oh yes, they do.

Six years . . . until our differences finally collided when after months of testing, the doctors determined that our odds of ever conceiving a child were infinitesimal to none. Ray was uncharacteristically quiet for a day or so, then resumed his usual morning whistling. Unable to bear it, with a stone lodged in my throat, I fled.

Once here, I immersed myself in a diet of local foods, a sort of obsession that crowded out the memory of Rayís whistling, the shadow of the empty crib. I shopped every morning at the village markets for fresh produce: scallions, radicchio, and plump red tomatoes at one booth, fresh peaches and blueberries from the buxom grinning lass at the next.

A short walk took me to the docks, where fishermen sold the morningís catch. Inside their tattered coolers Iíd find indignant crabs, beautiful scallops and mussels hiding in their shells, fresh mackerel, haddock, and bass.

Every morning I filled two canvas bags with this delicious fare and took it back to my cottage, thinking of nothing but how I would prepare the dayís meals. I kept a few items in the tiny kitchen and used them to create my simple dishes. Butter and cream from a dairy in the nearby countryside. Salt, pepper, lemon. Green herbs in little clay pots.

This fresh local diet served my purposes well enough. Shopping took the better part of the morning, and I could stretch meal preparation and cleanup into several hours during the day. Any spare moments I spent on the deck, looking out at the waves and thinking of the next dayís shopping excursion. I came to the cottage without any technology, so I wrote out my recipes by hand, thinking that I might try to sell a pamphlet at the produce booths.

If there were hours to fill in the evening, perhaps youíll not be surprised that I found a nearby vintner who was happy to sell me any number of bottles of fine red wine.

The farmersí wives in their little booths learned to know my preferences, and sometimes they set aside a particularly delectable tidbit for me. We have some lovely new potatoes today. Thereís rhubarb, itíll make a wonderful chutney. Have you ever tried cloudberries? They grow wild near here. At the docks, too, the weathered and leathery fellows would beckon me over for my pick of the morningís choicest shrimp.

It was that very shrimp, in fact, that led me to where I am at this moment. I was preparing it this evening (in a simple sauce of white wine, butter, oregano and garlic) when it seemed to me that I was craving not this fresh and healthy fare but a fatty hamburger, dripping with melted cheese. Deep-fried onion rings. A few of those yellow sponge cakes with creamy white filling. You know the ones I mean. In short, I wanted the sort of food that Ray was certainly eating at that very second.

I wanted Ray.

I left the shrimp and got in my car. Iíll settle up with the cottageís owner by mail, with a generous bonus. This little motel has all I need for tonight, and tomorrow morning Iíll drive the last few hours to Ray, to that annoyingly cheerful whistling, even to the room that was to have been a nursery. We have some things to talk about, Ray and I: blueberries and bluegrass, Marmaduke and mackerel. And yokes. I need to know more about yokes.

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C D Swanson 08/09/12
Awww. I loved the ending. I am so glad that she reconciled with her hubby at the end. Good story and so entertaining. Thanks.

God bless~
Charla Diehl 08/09/12
I enjoyed the journey this piece took me on--and was so relieved it ended on a happy note.
Ellen Carr 08/10/12
I loved your story. It's beautifully written with wonderful use of language. Thank you.
C D Swanson 08/16/12
Congrats! God Bless
Myrna Noyes08/16/12
WOW! I'm so glad you exercised your God-given gift for writing with this wonderful story! You truly have "a way with words" and can craft an excellent tale!

CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved E.C. win! :)
Nancy Bucca08/19/12
Wow, this was great. I too loved the happy ending - and what I'm sure was intended as a pun at the end about those yokes. Congratulations on a well deserved EC.