The Official Writing Challenge
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08/09/12
This could be a country song. It was entertaining and wanted to know how it was going to conclude. I enjoyed it very much.

Thanks. God bless~
08/11/12
I love your poem. You paint a wonderful picture of an amazing woman, with a little flaw! Well done.
08/13/12
Finally...someone has pointed out the Proverbs 31 woman's flaw! Haha! Delightful read! God bless!
08/15/12
I enjoyed this cute entry, but felt it was a little on addressing the topic.
Such a fun and delightful read. Wow! I loved the rhythm and the descriptions of what a woman, wife, and mother can do was so masterfully penned. This flowed and I wanted more. I figured, with a smile, that you would confess, yes, that though we are creatures of much capabillty and production, many of us, alas, succumb to the little 4 letter word. :) Well done Janice! Loved it!:)