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This is a lovely devotion. You did a nice job of interacting with the reader. (Though i am one of those weird ones who doesn't like chocolate but have been on a rice cake kick for months)The Bible verses you selected went with your message perfectly. (Just remember to add which translation you use and when quoting songs make sure it is in public domain and you add a footnote crediting composer) You handled the topic in an insightful way and gave me some food for thought. :) Good job.
08/03/12
Okay...You had me at "chocolate!" I enjoyed this entry that held significant messages and provided fuel for thought.

Thank you. God bless~
08/08/12
You did well touching on both physical food and spiritual food. I like the line about how we hate to diet, our waist line likes it but not our taste buds. God bless!
08/09/12
A good exegesis on physical and spiritual food. The part about dieting and eating food that seems not appetizing is interesting. A nicely written piece.
08/09/12
Wonderful imagery and humour throughout the beginning, and then a very smooth bridge to a comprehensive challenge to feed on the scriptures. Well done